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Morning Blues

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Jennibean:
Just another for the other!

Sunset Blues
If it’s a winner the score doesn’t count
Who cares anyway as long as it lasts?
I’m already tired and I just woke up
With twisted thoughts that rock in the past
 Wherever you are it is a beautiful morning
Breathtaking clouds I can smell the coffee!


Positive is good the attraction is some food
Party on the slip stool whatever is good!
It sounds like magic why not get to the beat?
Collude with the sand man or go back to sleep
Once again the radio DJ ignites me to my feet
Hit the tune let’s make it work
Turn the disc for all it’s worth
Rock the world and just dance
Sweat the heat for the daybreak to last

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