Blast from the past

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Katie Wilson

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« on: February 15, 2018, 02:05:10 PM »
This is just a title that I've had in my head this morning
and that's it really the rest just followed , I've tried to add beats to give an understanding of a melody
it's written as a song for oasis but In a mellow style for Liam's vocals

Blast from the past

I saw her at a club on Saturday night
It's been twelve years , since we had we our fight

(Beat- Bah bah bah -bah bah / bah bah bah -bah bah )

When I saw her eyes , I was so surprised
She didn't see me , she was with some guys

Beat- Bah bah bah -bah bah / bah bah bah -bah bah )

I turned to my mate
and said - it's a blast from the past , it's a blast from the past

Beat- Bah bah bah -bah bah / bah bah bah -bah bah )

She was wearing yellow, her favourite colour
I couldn't look away , I didn't want to stay

Beat- Bah bah bah -bah bah / bah bah bah -bah bah )

I turned to my mate
and said- it's a blast from the past , it's a blast from the past)

Beat- Bah bah bah bah bah / bah bah bah- bah bah )

then she looked my way and I froze
but she didn't know who I was
her legs were as smooth as before
I knew I couldn't walk out that door
and leave her behind again

Beat- Bah bah bah- bah bah / bah bah bah- bah bah )

I turned to my mate
and said- it's a blast from the past , it's a blast from the past)

Beat- Bah bah bah -bah bah / bah bah bah -bah bah )

I walked slowly to where she was
and stood by her side for a moment

Its a blast from the past, it's a blast from the past

She looked into my eyes but didn't know me
she didn't know me
She didn't know me
she walked past me without looking back

Beat- Bah bah bah -bah bah / bah bah bah -bah bah )

My mate came up to me
gave me a pint and said

Its a blast from the past, it's a blast from the past

Beat- Bah bah bah -bah bah / bah bah bah- bah bah )

Its a blast from the past, it's a blast from the past

Beat- Bah bah bah -bah bah / bah bah bah- bah bah )

I walked home broken hearted

Beat- Bah bah bah -bah bah / bah bah bah- bah bah )
Beat- Bah bah bah -bah bah / bah bah bah- bah bah )
Beat- Bah bah bah -bah bah / bah bah bah- bah bah )

Beat fades away



















« Last Edit: February 15, 2018, 03:21:22 PM by Katie Wilson »

Mike67

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« Reply #1 on: February 23, 2018, 12:14:33 PM »
Really like some of the rhymes here (eyes, surprised, guys) - gives it a nice flow. Sorry if interfering again, but I'd consider joining the couplets, e.g.:

I saw her at a club on Saturday night
Been twelve years since we had we our fight
When I saw her eyes I was so surprised
Didn't see me looking, she was with some guys

Beat- Bah bah bah -bah bah / bah bah bah -bah bah )

Katie Wilson

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« Reply #2 on: February 23, 2018, 03:05:25 PM »
Thanks if you want to give it a re-write and do something with it - do by all means please
Do,
Katie xxx