[pacho]

Hello everyone , last week Im so stressed so yesterday I sat odwn and wrote this stuff:
I want to know your opinions about it:

https://soundcloud.com/patriciomusica/relax



Just relax my friend
Cause nothing is happening
The only thing that happen
Wont you remember, year within


Everything
Just get out of your head
You dont have to believe
You just wont bwe stressed

And you wont be streesed
You will be just there
Doing whatever it trakes
Dont thinking what can happen


Just relax my friend
Nothing is happening
Now just  imagine
That you are fallin

Twenty seconds to death
What would you do?
Would you be streesed
Or doing something to save you?

[Robbie S]

Hi Pacho

Beautiful Spanish guitar intro, would love to hear more of that.

The singing is very heartfelt, nice work.

Really like the line "Just relax my friend
Nothing is happening"

Best
Robbie

[Katie Wilson]

Lovely and mellow, not really my thing but I enjoyed listening to it xx

[Wicked Deeds]

The introduction immediately sets a lovely mood.  I’d consider making it a little shorter.  When the vocal comes in, make sure that it takes centre- stage and sits above the guitar in the mix.  Lyrically, perhaps explore the theme of stress, what has caused your stress, the impact on your life and the wisdom of dealing with stress in a positive manner.  By far the most interesting aspect of this is the interplay of the guitars during the intro and outro.

Feel free to take on board my suggestions or to discard.  An enjoyable listen.  I’d like to hear this progress further. 

Paul