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jim morrison:
http://soundcloud.com/sunset-music-productions/freight-train-riot-acoustic

I rushed the acoustic version of this a bit, but see what you think

Soul Punk:
Not gonna lie

I loved this, the way it is right now!

I suggest to keep it as raw as it turned out gives it a very down to earth quality

enjoyed it alot

digger72:
Hi Jim,

Like the bluesy feel of the guitars. I like the vocal arrangement, but not so sure about the echo effect on the vocal. I tend towards the gruff, blues vocals. Lyrics are good ol' blues based. Some harmonica would be nice in there.

Overall good tune.

Digger

chrislong170273:
Hey Jim,

i'm lovin your stuff. The verse in particular in this, with that 'moneyesque' guitar riff.
I don't like giving specific suggestions cos it's so subjective.
But for me, the strummed guitar pattern halts the flow a bit

little reverb on the voice would also be something to try, a la Mr E from Eels?

(sorry, just reread that, change to 'a little less reverb')

but i really did enjoy this
 :)

Chris

Kafla:
Jim - I really like this - your best song for me

Could be a little tighter during the acoustic part but thats a minor grumble

I really like this ;D

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