(new song) Tomorrow.

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Royston

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« Reply #15 on: February 14, 2018, 11:05:19 PM »
A beautiful and moving song well produced and sung enjoyed the listen.

Cheers

Royston

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« Reply #16 on: February 15, 2018, 09:30:42 AM »
A beautiful sundscape. Great power in the song.  I hear it as an album track. It could be part of a great concept album that tell some an on-going story from one song to the next.  Musically, there is a strong element of fantasyland that supports the aforementioned idea.

Paul

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« Reply #17 on: February 16, 2018, 02:25:19 AM »
Flawless as expected from you Kevin
I really like the guitar and synth work in this - stellar!

Paul

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« Reply #18 on: February 16, 2018, 02:57:43 PM »
Hi Kevin, another excellent production,great atmosphere very airy. Nice acoustic guitar sound too. Vocals up to your normal high standard! What's not to like?
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Jamie

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« Reply #19 on: February 17, 2018, 08:29:16 PM »
Hi,
I really enjoyed listening to your song! :)
My only recommendation would be to cut the reverb back on your vocal. This would push your voice forward in the mix more. It will also add more clarity for your lyrics to the listener. Please don't be scared of showcasing your vocal. Putting lots of reverb on vocals is a common mistake. You do not need to hide your voice. Remember that no matter how good the music is a song is all about the vocal and you have a great voice so please don't drown it in reverb because you really do not need to do that.
Johnny :)

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« Reply #20 on: February 17, 2018, 11:58:57 PM »
Reminds me of Enya. Tangerine Dream, and someone I can't place.

When tightened, this will be a very nice piece. Well done

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« Reply #21 on: February 18, 2018, 12:14:09 AM »
I didn't like it at all

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« Reply #22 on: February 19, 2018, 02:55:51 PM »
I didn't like it at all

That's helpful. Great contribution.

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« Reply #23 on: February 19, 2018, 03:01:36 PM »
Hi Kevin,

Another great sounding song. It has that indefinable something which makes your stuff so compelling. I loved the instrumentation and the arrangement. It doesn't really have a hook to remember it by but when it's happening, it's great. You have a very deep well of ideas, a large bucket and lot's of rope!

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« Reply #24 on: February 25, 2018, 09:27:48 AM »
kev,
another of your hypnotic tunes which builds and builds. epic intro, liking hearing your vocals more up front and like the quieter outro.
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neil
songwriter of no repute..

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« Reply #25 on: March 01, 2018, 03:56:06 PM »
Hi Kevin,

impressive song and playing. I'd have preferred a bit more oomph in the low end but that may be my system. It sounds a little like Big County, not a bad thing at all.

Keith