That was really interesting. Had a definite late-60s California jam band type feel, like Quicksilver Messenger Service or something, and I guess the lyrics fit that Easy Rider type vibe too.
Biggest positives for me were the lush guitar sounds, the sleepy vocal delivery in the verses, and the ambitious structure... the way it is divided up into a few quite contrasting sections - especially the intro caught my attention straight away.
The bits I felt needed work were some timing issues with the guitars, the vocals in the choruses (felt like you were singing above your range... try it down an octave?), and the lyrics don't make sense to me in some lines ("the whole building can hear you loud", "try not to get into blind"... or maybe you want them to be a bit confusing?).
Could be a very cool slacker song with a bit more polish though, as it definitely has a clear atmosphere.
