[RealKevM]

Here's another song called Just Enough. My voice is a work in progress lol. Please let me know what you think
https://soundcloud.com/realkevm2/justenoughstudio

[pnb]

Hi there!

Thanks for posting.

I understand your voice is a WIP but it’s holds it together enough for me to get a sense of the melody. With the right vocalist, or indeed after some coaching practice, the melody will sit much better.

I found the verse to be too dependent on a straight 4/4 beat. (Ie accenting the crotchets). For me, this took some of the energy away from the song. The rest of it flowed much better.

Chord pattern is nice and your writing comes across as authentic.

It was a pleasure to listen to

Thanks.

PNB

[RealKevM]

Thanks pnb, I really appreciative your comments, thank you

[Viva La Stereo]

This is good, it's raw and your personality shines from it. The song itself I love, the melody is very nice and the lyrics compliment it brilliantly. I think if you recorded the guitar and vocals seperately and mixed them it would be even better, but that's just my personal opinion and you can do what you like with it. Strangely your voice has a Johnny Thunders vibe. It really works.

[RealKevM]

Thanks! That's really encouraging I really appreciate you taking the time to listen and to let me know your thoughts. My voice is what lets me down really but your comments have given me a bit of a boost

[Bankie]

Even though your voice wasn't hitting the right notes properly and I found it difficult to work out what you were aiming for, it's still pretty catchy. A strong vocal would certainly have helped bring out the potential of this.

[RealKevM]

Cheers

[irwin]

You played the guitar well I like the intro chords.This song has potential I encourage You keep doing what you're doing

If you do a full Production of this song, you'll see how good a song you have.

[RealKevM]

Thank you sir

[RealKevM]

I've developed the song a bit further and after noticing a very similar chord structure to Prince 'When Doves Cry' i've added a bit of that to the end for a bit of fun. Here's a live version from last weekend

[diademgrove]

I enjoyed listening to your song. Shame about the chatter as I didn't catch all the words. Do you still consider it a work in progress? It sounds pretty complete to me.

Keith

[Sterix]

Track seems to have been moved/deleted.

[RealKevM]

I enjoyed listening to your song. Shame about the chatter as I didn't catch all the words. Do you still consider it a work in progress? It sounds pretty complete to me.

Keith

Hi Keith, it's definitely finished now and i'm really happy with it. Thanks for checking out !

[RealKevM]

Track seems to have been moved/deleted.

Hi sorry mate, the soundcloud link in the original post is gone, the one i've recently posted (youtube) is the one i'm after feedback on