I'm on a real purple patch at the moment having completed 3 other songs in the last 3 weeks or so. I don't tie myself to a particular style, but melodic rock is where I end up a lot, and that's what this is.
I do this for fun, so I normally just post to Facebook (
https://www.facebook.com/Colin-McGregor-108833974644/). Problem is, family and friends aren't the best people for giving criticism (constructive or otherwise), so am particularly interested in any areas you think could be improved.
https://soundcloud.com/bankie666/underneath-my-skinLyricsVerseYour voice calls out my name
And tells me I'm to blame
But I did my best, I'd say
Yet you treated me this way
You looked inside my heart
And picked me all apart
You said I was enough
But this wasn't love
ChorusWhat kind of fool do you take me for?
Pulling me inside-out and more
All of this trouble you got me in
You're so far underneath my skin
VerseThere's a corner of my mind
Don't want anyone to find
How can I let anybody see
There's a part of me that still believes
(Repeat chorus)
How can a moment last forever?
I hear you say you'll never go
How do you haunt my every move?
(Repeat chorus)