[Messager]

Hey Everyone!

I've been working on this instrumental; kind of using it as something to use to work on a bit of sampling.  It's got some nice jazzy chords that I'm quite fond of 

https://soundcloud.com/mesager/drift/s-cG6fG

Just wanted to see if anyone had any tips or ideas before I put it up, I'd really appreciate it!

Much love,
Messager 

[dasntn]

Hi

nice vibe to it - kind of acid jazzy (showing my age!)

Is the "needle on record" supposed to be there? Not sure why you'd want it, kind of detracts for the mood.
cheers
Dave

[cowparsleyman]

I really dig your vibe.

cpm

[Ramshackles]

I think it needs to develop into something a bit sooner than it does, it gets a bit repetitive by 1min as it hasn't ever introduced any strong melody or theme.

The out of tune cowbell doesn't sound great, I'd replace it for something hitting a note....

Cool start and I quite like the sound of it. Sounds like the kind of music that needs more reverb, drenched in it

[pompeyjazz]

Lot's of potential. Needs a killer vocal imo

[irwin]

cool going song, lovely.

[Cazrolina]

Oooh. There's some great potential here. Great instrumental. Balearic/after hours vibe.  Just turning the cow bell down a bit i think, or a slightly different bit of percussion. Really good vibes here.