[The one]

When I Wake

First thing
In the morning
As Ah open ma eyes
All Ah want to see
Is you layin next to me

You are the one for me
You are ma destiny
When Ah wake
All Ah want to see
Is you layin next to me

Ma vision of you
Is all it cold be
Beautiful woman
Ah layin next to me

You close your eyes
You dream your dream
You're the most beautiful woman
Ah've ever seen

Now Ah want you to know
The way Ah feel
The way Ah love
Is surreal

Just one look at you
Filled me with desire
You've opened ma heart
Set it on fire

Ma vision of you
Is all it could be
Beautiful woman
Ah layin next to me

You close your eyes
You dream your dream
You're the most beautiful woman
Ah have ever seen

[Nicolajane87]

Hi Tom,

Glad to see you have completed the song, nice rhyming I like it, there are a few spelling errors but apart from that it’s great.

Nicola

[The one]

Thanks Nicola

I'm pleased you were not disappointed.

Tom

[Oldbutyet]

Hey man dont correct the spelling errors (they're deliberate right) record this as is word for word and you got something great, just make sure you pronounce the words as is.

[The one]

Hi Old but yet.

Thanks for the positive review.

You are right. This is the way I had intended writing my song. Only spelling mistake is cold instead of could.

To

[Oldbutyet]

"Only spelling mistake is cold instead of could"

Hell shit i thought that was a mixture of both, you got something i can listen to or are you just a lyric writer 

[The one]

Hi

I think you will agree this song is quite a moving song. I have a tune inside my head which I think is a very good match for the words. Who knows. If I get enough positive responses I my go to the effort of going to a recording studio and recording it.

Tom

[Hooded Singer]

It sounds like a song to make love to.

Take that any way you want to.

[Oldbutyet]

Hi

I think you will agree this song is quite a moving song. I have a tune inside my head which I think is a very good match for the words. Who knows. If I get enough positive responses I my go to the effort of going to a recording studio and recording it.

Tom

Hey Tom do you play an instrument  

[The one]

No I do not play an instrument. Why do you ask?

[Oldbutyet]

their are many musicians around here 

[The one]

Believe me its not instrumentation this song needs at the moment. It needs to be sung. Just wait another week or two and I will see if I can get something out there.

[Oldbutyet]

Okay 

[The one]

Hi old one.

I have recorded my song. If you want to hear it send me your email address. My email address is   tmlesley@outlook.com