Sitting on the bus surrounded by phones ( some swearing blanked out )

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Katie Wilson

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« on: January 16, 2018, 12:54:59 PM »
Sitting on the bus surrounded by phones

Sitting on the bus surrounded by phones
does everyone feel so alone ?
that they can't just look out the window
Where did it all go wrong ?

Chorus

Yap yap yap nonsense nonsense
as the wheels on the bus turn round
Yap yap yap nonsense nonsense
all this f***ing sound

Sitting on the bus surrounded by strangers
sharing their love lives with me
why can't they just be quiet
and work out what's for tea ?

Chorus

Yap yap yap nonsense nonsense
as the wheels on the bus turn round
Yap yap yap nonsense nonsense
all this f***ing sound

sitting on the bus at the end of my day
wanting piece and quiet
all these morons , on their phones
are they so alone

Chorus

Yap yap yap nonsense nonsense
as the wheels on the bus turn round
Yap yap yap nonsense nonsense
all this f***ing sound

Sitting on the bus , reached my destination
thank god that's all over
Sitting on the bus surrounded by strangers
does everyone feel alone

Chorus

Yap yap yap nonsense nonsense
as the wheels on the bus turn round
Yap yap yap nonsense nonsense
all this f***ing sound

Chorus

Yap yap yap nonsense nonsense
as the wheels on the bus turn round
Yap yap yap nonsense nonsense
all this f***ing sound













































The one

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« Reply #1 on: January 19, 2018, 02:13:51 PM »
Hi I am Tom.

Brilliant. Expresses my sentiments bout mobile phones.

Nicolajane87

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« Reply #2 on: January 19, 2018, 02:51:18 PM »
Hi Katie,

I like this, it’s a great subject to write about, I think a lot of people can relate to this.

Nicola

Oldbutyet

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« Reply #3 on: January 19, 2018, 03:14:11 PM »
This is good so true really good, im hearing keyboard telephonic sound with at times loads of voices coming in at maybe a help for bridge or chorus, then at the end you could turn things around and have something like "damn my phone ringing, yap yap yap nonsense nonsense" or maybe include that famous word "whatever"

The theme tune to "Are You Been Served" came to mind as a example, whats your own music ideas do you have for this.

Katie Wilson

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« Reply #4 on: January 19, 2018, 03:45:39 PM »
Hi thanks for all the nice comments , I hadn't really thought about it but I can imagine it being a fun song like a house of fun or baggy trousers by madness