Hi Jambrains,
Does it for me, both music and lyrics stick around long after it's over. I'm not really familiar with anything you've posted before, but judging by what one or two others have said, it sounds like you sometimes like to turn it up to eleven. Finding fault is difficult, though i think your vocal could be a wee bit more forceful in places. That being said, it's a beautiful piece of work my friend.
Vintage54