What Is Right

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Skub

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« Reply #15 on: January 06, 2018, 09:51:38 PM »
Yo dasntn...that's some dyslexic handle!  :D

Welcome to the forum.

I love the light,airy folk feel to this and I'm also a fan of music that conflicts with the lyrical content.

The bridge part especially reminded me of Paul McCartney,no shame there!

I've been checking out your Spotify songs,good stuff on there.  :)

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« Reply #16 on: January 08, 2018, 09:05:13 PM »
Ramshackles has done a brilliant remix of the track for me - it's up on Soundcloud
https://soundcloud.com/dasntn/what-is-right-remix-by-ramshackles

Have a listen!

Dave

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« Reply #17 on: January 09, 2018, 02:01:09 PM »
Thanks @skub - any comparison to Paul McCartney is most welcome!

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« Reply #18 on: January 10, 2018, 06:05:05 PM »
Lovely verses...really get you right there!

Agree with Ramshackles that the next parts are not quite as satisfying...think it's the way it goes down, no not so much that as that it doesn't vary at all melodically until the end of the last line...maybe both these things taken together. Maybe it's just that the first parts are so appealing!

The bridge has much more bounce to it!

The weave of the guitar and mandlola thing very nice.

Outro very good with those harmonies...takes the song out in style!
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« Reply #19 on: January 10, 2018, 08:12:29 PM »
Really moving and heartfelt ballad. Reminded me of Never Going Back Again by Fleetwood Mac but more melancholic. I really enjoyed the vocal and the directness of the lyrics, as well as the lovely mandola and guitar work. Interesting and unexpected melodic turn in the middle eight. Nicely done x

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« Reply #20 on: August 27, 2019, 06:04:49 PM »
Really pleased that this song was picked up by BBC Introducing (after I uploaded it!) and it was played on BBC Devon and Cornwall on Saturday night this weekend. Feeling chuffed!!

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« Reply #21 on: August 27, 2019, 06:49:09 PM »
Congratulations @dasntn - well deserved.