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mimilea

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« on: January 03, 2018, 05:33:28 PM »
You didn't show me that you was so sad.
Although with you, I was the happiest.
You taught me right from wrong.
You taught me to be strong.
But I will never be like you the strongest.

You wanted to leave this Earth.
You said that I'm the only one.
Who held you to live, the only one.
I was your reason for living since my birth.

Do I behave as well as I should?
Yeah !
Do I behave as well as I should?

I hope that you are proud of me.
Proud of everything I accomplished.
I have broken down and cried.
I'm missing you and it's killing me.
Miss your gentle hug and tender kiss.
Miss everything, mainly your bliss.
Miss you, yeah, I miss you.
I can't describe how I miss you.


Even if nobody knows where you are.
Your soul will be near to me forever.
When i close my eyes, i can see you.
You'll live deep within my heart forever.
You know i will never forget you.

You left this world, you let me alone.
For you I will try to carry on
I'll always thinking about you.
Now, tomorrow and until I join you

Do I behave as well as I should?
Yeah !
Do I behave as well as I should?

I hope that you are proud of me.
Proud of everything I accomplished.
I have broken down and cried.
I'm missing you and it's killing me.
Miss your gentle hug and tender kiss.
Miss everything, mainly your bliss.
Miss you, yeah, I miss you.
I can't describe how I miss you.


I didn't think that your flame will die.
But fate has decided otherwise.
I didn't think that your flame will die.
But fate has decided otherwise.
No, you didn't deserve that.

I hope that you are proud of me.
Proud of everything I accomplished.
I have broken down and cried.
I'm missing you and it's killing me.
Miss your gentle hug and tender kiss.
Miss everything, mainly your bliss.
Miss you, yeah, I miss you.
I can't describe how I miss you.


I miss you, yeah, I miss you


Vintage54

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« Reply #1 on: January 04, 2018, 09:29:07 PM »

   Hello mimilea,

       Your first post i see, so welcome. I found this really moving, it's obviously about someone you loved dearly, that much comes across. I'm guessing it's a parent, maybe your Mother. But then there's that line,
"You wanted to leave this Earth" that makes me think it could be about a lover who commited suicide. But whoever it's about, i was certainly touched by it. My only nit is, shouldn't it be, "I didn't think that your flame (would) die" rather than "Will". But that's just minor. I look forward to your next post.

                             Vintage54

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« Reply #2 on: January 05, 2018, 10:13:53 AM »
Words from deep inside you Mimi...sorry to hear that you had a such a bad experience.

Powerful stuff, thanks

CPM

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« Reply #3 on: January 16, 2018, 02:06:11 AM »
Hi Mimi

A sad song but so well written. I enjoyed your rendition.

Tom.

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« Reply #4 on: January 19, 2018, 02:58:18 PM »
Hi mimi,

It’s a sad song but you tell it really well, beautiful lyrics.

Nicola

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« Reply #5 on: January 19, 2018, 11:59:40 PM »
Hey Mimilea warm welcome to you, as vintage said you got something here that is very moving, is this your first thoughts put to writing.

On your lyrics your first verse i think maybe.

You taught me right from wrong.
You taught me to be strong.
But I will never be like you the strongest
You didn't show me that you was so sad.
Although with you, I was the happies