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Neil C

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« Reply #30 on: January 10, 2018, 09:20:47 AM »
Hi,
Good direct and catchy tune. Which provides a good platform for you. Dreamy vocals and story.
Like the guitars and harmonies. It's like it's been demo found in the vault and has its own charm.
Neat one
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« Reply #31 on: January 10, 2018, 09:57:04 AM »
Hi RedRhodie

Nice song, and a great idea.

I felt that the verses might benefit from a bit of variety to the melody, and meter of the lyrics, I found myself knowing what was coming all too soon, take a risk and hike the melody upwards, or downwards, and leave out lyrics making space for the melody that people have in their heads from the first verse.

As they say in Jazz, if it's more than 50% predictable people will be bored, and less than 50% then they'll also be bored.

Hope you don't mind.


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« Reply #32 on: January 11, 2018, 10:55:01 AM »
Thanks Neil. I appreciate the kind words. Glad you liked it.

Interesting thoughts cpm, but it seems I'm damned to be boring no matter what. Oh well. I guess you can't win 'em all.
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« Reply #33 on: January 11, 2018, 01:19:56 PM »
Hi, a nice uplifting 60's vibe to this. Like the vocals they suit the vibe, and it didn't sound too much like anything I know ???.
Well done!
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« Reply #34 on: January 11, 2018, 10:11:05 PM »
This is really good, love the coolest of it all, great imagery of a live stage performance and that is one of the coolest imagery i had in a while, are you in band  8)

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« Reply #35 on: January 12, 2018, 11:16:38 AM »
Hi, a nice uplifting 60's vibe to this. Like the vocals they suit the vibe, and it didn't sound too much like anything I know ???.
Well done!
Cheers
Jamie

Thanks for listening, Jamie.

This is really good, love the coolest of it all, great imagery of a live stage performance and that is one of the coolest imagery i had in a while, are you in band  8)

Yes, I'm in a band. Right now it's me, Dave and Keith. We don't play live at this point.

Thanks for the nice words.
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« Reply #36 on: January 13, 2018, 03:11:52 PM »
Hi Lynn,

It reminds me of that song... insert title of a quality 60s song. ;D

Nothing leapt out at me - just sounded great.

I'm a sucker for 60s rock/pop, so it works for me.

Strong tune and vocal delivery.

What's not to like?

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« Reply #37 on: January 16, 2018, 06:07:47 PM »
Hi,

Lovely 60's vibe. Very good vocals and groovy rhythm.
Not sure if I like the jangly guitars ...

Anyway, Good stuff!

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« Reply #38 on: January 17, 2018, 11:59:07 AM »
Hi Lynn,

What's not to like?

Digger

Thanks Digger. You can ask our friend that question.

Hi,

Lovely 60's vibe. Very good vocals and groovy rhythm.
Not sure if I like the jangly guitars ...

Anyway, Good stuff!

refusedrevival


Thanks for that, refused revival. Glad you liked it.
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