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A Summer Place(2nd) revision)
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wkamen
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A Summer Place(2nd) revision)
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December 08, 2017, 10:01:17 PM »
I Woke up to the sound of a cold rain
wrapped in a memory as tears embrace my face
like raindrops hugging the leaves.
I think about that song a summer place
and picture you and me on that beach
I remember that lonely stretch of sand
watching you swaying to the rhythm of the waves
I walked up to you and Iooked into your eyes
and my heart felt like a baby’s first heartbeat
saying hello
I knew I’d met the girl I swore I’d never find
We walked along barefoot in the sand
whispering under my breath
I’ve found the love for me
We stopped at the water’s edge
The ocean breeze brought a soft
sensuous touch as we embraced
and had our first dance in the sand
listening to the song, a summer place
Every time I hear that song
I picture you and me on that beach
Strange how a song sounds like a memory
Somewhere, somewhere only we know.
Locked in an orbital embrace
Our bodies exposed a blue glow
from the sparkling blue sea
releasing energy with a passion
and we kissed
Lost in that moment with you
I was totally consumed
binding our love with a kiss
As daylight fades
a perfect sunset
gave life to a perfect day
I didn’t want this day to end
I didn’t want this day to ever ever end
Every time I hear that song
I picture you and me on that beach
Strange how a song sounds like a memory
Somewhere, somewhere only we know.
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tomcrocus
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Re: A Summer Place(2nd) revision)
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December 11, 2017, 06:44:16 PM »
Hi wkamen,
i love it,i don't know where to start because there's so many clever
lines,rhymes and couplets,"Strange how a song sounds like a memory",that's
sweet and so relateable,i really enjoyed the read,thanks,
Tom.
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wkamen
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Re: A Summer Place(2nd) revision)
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January 04, 2018, 12:21:15 AM »
Thanks Tom for looking in and commenting
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