An American-esque high school movie pop song - any ideas for lyrics?

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« Reply #30 on: February 10, 2018, 04:41:36 PM »
Loving seeing (hearing) the changes as this developed. Having heard the songs early draft, pre-lyrics, and now with words, its brill stuff. Now your words are there im not picking up the other song mentioned thing, at all. And your chorus melody line high bits sound ace. Good job. cx

Thanks very much Caz,

'Texas' is nearly finished, I'll pop it up here when it's ready, needs just a bit of polish, like the 'Stang (I walk past one every day, a lovely bright orange one), the one in my mind in the song, however, is a red one, soft top, a 60's style...with a shed load of party people in it, headscarves, cardigans, preppy stuff, cool shades, just like something out of Nation Lampoons Animal House....

http://masbukti.com/ford/ford-mustang/1964-ford-mustang-convertible

  ..sure has been an interesting journey.


cpm

Here's the final version.

https://soundcloud.com/cowparsleyman/texas-twister-2018

It started with a song that I had no idea what to do with, then I joined this website, had some lovely welcoming words from Vicki, Purple Cherry, PaulyX and PompeyJazz, then put it up this forum, RedRhodie gave me some encouragement and put me in touch with a friend of hers that might want to help with it, fortunately pkboo3 was up for it and here's the result, thanks to all of you that commented, actually re recorded it for me to hear, wrote lyrics, and gave me so much inspiration. Thanks too to AFox, that great idea is being worked on...Matt for so much enthusiasm.

Please let me know what you think.

cpm
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