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Ballad of Ron and Reg (live)

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JoeAntaine

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« on: December 04, 2017, 11:39:21 PM »

Paulski

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« Reply #1 on: December 05, 2017, 12:07:53 AM »
Lovely piano playing and vocals.
There doesn't seem to be a lyrical hook?
Maybe if you post the lyrics I would get it - us Canucks can be thick..  ;D ;D

Enjoyed the listen
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« Reply #2 on: December 05, 2017, 12:13:47 AM »
Running fast til our race is run
Two punch drunk fighters trying be someone
Ronnie what have you done to us?
Ronnie what have you done.

If you seen the future then it's no surprise
Now we stand witness to our demise
Ronnie what have you done to us?
Ronnie what have you done.

It doesn't really matter anymore
And I'm left here thinking what it all was for
And If I was kind would she be out there
And I'd see her every sunday
Til she found a man who cared

Those champagne night's bathed in ice and gold
Some say we're legends well that's what I'm told
Ronnie what have they done to us?
Ronnie what have they done.

Now listen brother don't you ever feel alone
I know you struggle when you're on your own
I hope I not defined by the evil that I've done
Cos I am somebody's brother and we are our mother's sons

Forged together both of heart and soul
I doubt we'll see Jesus but only he could know
Ronnie I hope it was enough
Everything thing we done

« Last Edit: December 05, 2017, 03:29:37 PM by nooms »

JoeAntaine

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« Reply #3 on: December 05, 2017, 12:17:42 AM »
Sorry I've had problems posting long messages on this forum tonight. Had no choice but to split it into parts. So sorry.

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« Reply #4 on: December 05, 2017, 02:56:18 PM »
Hey man, unless you have the premium membership I think you'll find you gotta wait 2 weeks between posting songs.
The Platinum membership lets you post when you like and not do any reviews. Which some peeps  obviously can afford. But not us. ;)

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« Reply #5 on: December 05, 2017, 03:38:43 PM »

hi joe
ive comped your lyric.. hope its in the right order..
next time please try and place them all on one page
its kind of traditional..

ok good luck
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« Reply #6 on: December 05, 2017, 03:56:40 PM »
Thanks from the comp mate. The site just won't let me post a long message.
Also Id no idea about the time restrictions. Just kill the thread if must. Sorry.

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« Reply #7 on: December 05, 2017, 03:58:55 PM »
Very well played and sung. I think they were pretty bad guys those two, so the touching ballad treatment you have given them probably idealises them in reality - maybe in the same way as Bonnie and Clyde were glamorised in their movie. It's puzzling how we do that in culture - yet this one works all the way, and its strangely reflective and poignant. Quite haunting really!
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« Reply #8 on: December 06, 2017, 01:42:18 AM »
Very well played and sung. I think they were pretty bad guys those two, so the touching ballad treatment you have given them probably idealises them in reality - maybe in the same way as Bonnie and Clyde were glamorised in their movie. It's puzzling how we do that in culture - yet this one works all the way, and its strangely reflective and poignant. Quite haunting really!
Well written well thought out review thank you for your time and your comments. God bless ya.