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Second Face - Alt. Rock Ballad
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jonlint
Open Mic
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Second Face - Alt. Rock Ballad
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December 21, 2017, 03:38:05 PM »
Hi all,
After a long writing pause I wanted to write an acoustic guitar ballad - something I never did. It ended up sounding a bit like my favourite acoustic ballad of all time - Follow the Sun Down from Dark New Day. Feedback welcome before I fine tune it, write lyrics or can it if you think it sucks!
https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3/second-face-demo
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Darren1664
Platinum Album
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Re: Second Face - Alt. Rock Ballad
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December 21, 2017, 06:19:51 PM »
The sound of this is great! It has a real powerful feel to it - nice wide guitar, bass and some punchy drums! And that guitar solo is brilliant
I think you're good to go
Thanks
Darren
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rightly
Stadium Tour
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December 25, 2017, 01:56:21 AM »
This sounds good to me. I don't know the song you refer to.
It's hard for me to imagine a vocal melody, this is something I'm not familiar with.
I like the music a lot.
Good luck.
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