Second Face - Alt. Rock Ballad

  • 2 Replies
  • 762 Views

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

jonlint

  • *
  • Open Mic
  • **
  • Posts: 105
« on: December 21, 2017, 03:38:05 PM »
Hi all,

After a long writing pause I wanted to write an acoustic guitar ballad - something I never did.  It ended up sounding a bit like my favourite acoustic ballad of all time - Follow the Sun Down from Dark New Day.  Feedback welcome before I fine tune it, write lyrics or can it if you think it sucks!

https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3/second-face-demo

Darren1664

  • *
  • Platinum Album
  • ****
  • Posts: 623
« Reply #1 on: December 21, 2017, 06:19:51 PM »
The sound of this is great! It has a real powerful feel to it - nice wide guitar, bass and some punchy drums! And that guitar solo is brilliant

I think you're good to go

Thanks

Darren

rightly

  • *
  • Stadium Tour
  • *****
  • Posts: 1942
  • newer Soundcloud https://soundcloud.com/2rightly
    • My cloud o' sound.
« Reply #2 on: December 25, 2017, 01:56:21 AM »
This sounds good to me. I don't know the song you refer to.
It's hard for me to imagine a vocal melody, this is something I'm not familiar with.
I like the music a lot.
Good luck.
It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

And there you have it. 

https://soundcloud.com/2rightly

https://soundcloud.com/rightly