[crystalsuzy]

Great lyrics, as everyone else has noted  Well sung too I found the backing track made me feel a little uncomfortable, which is probably what you were going for, so well done
Good for you for getting into Cubase...way more than I could handle

[rightly]

yes!
thanks Crystalsuzy, you're a star!

you're perceptive. The song isn't meant for a comfortable listen.
The music is jarring, as is the place which the singer is in. I'm glad you that.

Really, you don't get along so well with Cubase?
I'm really enjoying it, and making prfress with it.
There are plenty times when something goes wrong and I don't know how to correct it, it can be very frustrating.

It's effecting the way I play my acoustics. I think I can go back if I want - so that must mean I'm expanding. Exciting times for me.

I'm glad you like it!

[Binladeda]

 Wow  . Blew me away....

 Lovin the groove. Bass and drums are excellent. Great arrangement..

 Shades of Morrisey and, well, genius...in the vox and lyrics
 You have real style my friend...

 If anything, and in the spirit of perfection, as it's excellent as is....
 I think it's just a tad too busy.  Just drums, bass, keys and vox for me

 Love it...
 I'm a fan