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pacho

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« on: December 14, 2017, 09:47:48 PM »
Hello everyone , I have completed this song of mine .
The song i wrote in the summer and now i completed it .

This song is about being afraid something dangerous or something that look dangerous, And how beautiful sometimes dangerous things are .

There is YouTube video on I worked about six hours just editing :D
https://youtu.be/GHIvNqk2oMg
And Soundcloud of course:
https://soundcloud.com/patriciomusica/survived-1


LYRICS:

Looking
out of window
You wanna go outside

But they told you
dont be crazy
dont be foolish
look outside


Weve just survived
dont play at night
but our biggest fights
were winning at nights

Weve just survived
Looked at that sky
So beautiful at night
Would you know
       If you wouldn play outside tonight

Maybe Its too dangerous
But that
cant stop you
Looking out of window
You wanna go outside

But they told you
dont be crazy
dont be foolish
look outside

And I wonder
    And I wonder
They like their borders
Like noone else can dooo


Weve just survived
dont play at night
but our biggest fights
were winning at nights

Weve just survived
Looked at that sky
So beautiful at night
Would you know
       If you wouldn play outside tonight

AMAZING MIDI  GUITAR SOLOO

AMAZING ORCHESTRAL OUTRO

Thank you for lsitening everyone :*

« Last Edit: December 14, 2017, 11:04:46 PM by pacho »

Yodasdad

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« Reply #1 on: December 14, 2017, 10:38:35 PM »
Pacho,

I'm liking this and the video is great, wish I knew how to create a video like this, I think it adds to the atmosphere of the song.

Just one thing I picked up on, the line 'We're just survived'

I'm guessing it's probably a translation thing but it doesn't quite make sense to me.

I suspect something like 'We've just survived' or 'We have survived' might be what you're looking for.

I guess not all art has to make 100% sense though.

Good job overall with this.

Yodasdad


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« Reply #2 on: December 14, 2017, 10:47:18 PM »
Hi Pacho. You have a very haunting vibe here and some unusual chord progressions that work very well. I thought that this was a clever piece of work that had something different about it. Bravo  :)

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« Reply #3 on: December 14, 2017, 11:07:44 PM »
Pacho,

I'm liking this and the video is great, wish I knew how to create a video like this, I think it adds to the atmosphere of the song.

Just one thing I picked up on, the line 'We're just survived'

I'm guessing it's probably a translation thing but it doesn't quite make sense to me.

I suspect something like 'We've just survived' or 'We have survived' might be what you're looking for.

I guess not all art has to make 100% sense though.

Good job overall with this.

Yodasdad




Yeah, its weve just survived, you right . thank you for tell me :D Now it make sense 
BTW thank for response

And pompeyjazz Thank you , i was trying to do it different than anything else .. BTW .. why are chord progressions so unusuals?