International Demons

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mickyplankton

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« on: December 01, 2017, 09:54:24 PM »
Hi All,

Heres a 2 minute fun song to get you in the mood for the weekend :_)

https://soundcloud.com/mickyplankton/international-demons-1-0

As always feedback appreciated:

A man was pulled from the Pacific today
His pink body shrivelled and starting to decay
He can’t have his life back I heard someone say
I began to wonder if there was another way?
Had his life ended, before it had begun?
The truth was darer, a life on the run
Afraid and ashamed by all he had done
International demons,
No borders in the mind,
Tried and tested theories
Unravel and unwind
A body was pulled from the ocean today
His pink body shrivelled and starting to decay
He can’t have his life back I heard someone say
I began to wonder if there was another way?
(Had his life ended), before it had begun?
a life on the run
Afraid and ashamed by all he had done
International demons,
No borders in the mind,
Tried and tested theories
Unravel and unwind

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« Reply #1 on: December 01, 2017, 11:21:15 PM »
Wonderful stuff Micky.  So full of energy and attitude.  You will have to let me know if you're gigging in the deep south  :)

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« Reply #2 on: December 02, 2017, 01:08:44 AM »
Lots of punky energy  ;D
Not really what I would listen to genre -wise but seems to suit the style well from the little I know of it.

Paul

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« Reply #3 on: December 02, 2017, 09:04:03 AM »
Hellova rocker mate!!! weirdly interesting lyrics...punk is back!!! always liked punk!!
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« Reply #4 on: December 02, 2017, 09:26:54 AM »
Like the lyrics a lot mate - the way you link one tragic personal story / news item to some big themes; I like the spirit of it a lot.  Bet your guitarist broke a few strings playing this one.  Liked the bassline too.
It's all too beautiful.

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« Reply #5 on: December 02, 2017, 01:23:26 PM »
This is like a punk newscast, man.
1978 energy levels, foot to the floor beat, amphetamine bass line, untutored vocal, and a news bulletin.
It's a blast of punk anchorman energy.
Great stuff man, but where's Ron Burgundy?

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« Reply #6 on: December 03, 2017, 08:07:34 AM »
Back of the net, Micky.

A great set of intriguing lyrics...knocked out with a relentless punk backdrop. I was wracking my brain trying to figure out whose body it was...at first I thought "Robert Maxwell" but I don't think so...that's a hell of a tale to tell too...hmmm

anyway...another belter from you and the guys...great work!
heart of stone, feet of clay, knob of butter

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« Reply #7 on: December 03, 2017, 10:57:29 AM »
yeah!
Punky
I like the energy but I'm not well versed in Punk. went through my youth
having heard only Iggy and the clash and random local punk bands.
Always wanted to try a punk sound out.

I dunno if I can anymore.

thanks for sharing
cuz sharing is caring! Ahoi!

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« Reply #8 on: December 06, 2017, 01:37:37 PM »
Cool, with grotesque imagery, shriveled pink bodies, and all. Great atmosphere and energy. Enjoy it very much.

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« Reply #9 on: December 06, 2017, 06:07:50 PM »
Two minutes of energy.  A very retro sounding track with enough variation to hold our interest.  Enjoying the mixture of sung and spoken vocal. 

Cool!

Paul

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« Reply #10 on: December 06, 2017, 09:54:42 PM »
From one Micky to another...

Man this is ENERGY!!! Love the feel of this it's like a modern punk pop rock fest.

only thing I might suggest is a bit of a break somewhere. like a slowed down bridge or something to break the tension. or maybe a slow pre chorus. Just a suggestion, I think my pop sensibilities are coming out lol

Nice work!

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« Reply #11 on: December 07, 2017, 09:33:59 AM »
This one rolls back the years - in a good way - and it's refreshing to hear something so purposely raw and energetic in these controlled times of over polished productions. I loved the sireny guitars in the breaks and the agitating music is a great backdrop for the slightly edgy lyrical content. I was thinking Buzzcocks meets maybe Stiff Little Fingers in a modern reincarnation of punk's original spirit.

Amazing that it was only two minutes long, but seemed perfectly adequate at that length. Nice one.
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« Reply #12 on: December 07, 2017, 10:40:31 AM »
That blew the cobwebs out!

Not a huge punk fan myself but I enjoyed this. Loads of drive, authenticity and a catchy chorus.

What more could you want Really?

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« Reply #13 on: December 10, 2017, 05:34:12 PM »
I enjoy all your stuff - takes me back to a period of music i used to be well into.
Not quite as catchy as others you have done - but good stuff none the less and so authentic sounding
I'm imagining on green vinyl with a picture cover ;D

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« Reply #14 on: December 11, 2017, 11:37:11 AM »
What great energetic rock'n punk track this is  :o Loved the lyrics and the way you deliver them :)
Not my favorite genre, but I liked the message  :)  2 mins was just about right  :)