I've listened to it too many times to be truly objective. I think i know what it needs to take it up a level or two.
Didn't really write it to be like a chart song, but a commercial one nonetheless. This guy was on the Moroccan version of The Voice i think, thats why i used him.
My nephew (18) said it did sound like a Sheeran song , again not what i was attempting to do, but the title Ordinary things, is inspired by his subject matter..everyday ,ordinary life events.
The BV's are needed to give it some depth , he had more as well in other parts,that i got him to remove.