[Neil C]

Paul,
Lots to like on this one.
The lyrics and vocals all work well together - love charcoal skies line.
Its got an portentous feel with the strings and bass doing so neat things, before you get to the more insistent October skies chorus.
keep 'em coming
 
neil

[rightly]

very nice
has something goth about it for me.

Aye, October is an evil month, my month of birth.

really like the lyrics too.

well done!

[Theatreman]

What a great track! Lovely atmosphere and misty vocal. Enjoyed the lyrics too and the beguilingly simple melody. I'll check out some more of your stuff x

[Wicked Deeds]

Once again, I’m delighted that this song has appealed to so many people. It’s quirky unfortunate that it didn’t appear  on my album of the same name.  I think it would have deserved a place amongst the other tracks. It will however feature on the next album that  I release.

thanks again

Paul

[junkman]

It’s quirky unfortunate that it didn’t appear  on my album of the same name.

Oh well, you're in company with Led Zeppelin and the Doors, they did the same thing! I'm going to join the chorus of praise for this tune, not much to add to what others have said, fab melody and chords, great words. Your voice reminds me of Green Gartside only with the accent of Judee Sill.

I wonder if the acoustic guitar fills might sound more distinct on a clean electric, on the neck pickup, just a thought

[RealKevM]

This is really, really good.

[Jamie]

Hi, I thought I had already commented on this....... Good song, like the arrangement and the chord structure, the chorus is particularly nice. Good vocals.
Nice one!
Cheers
Jamie

[Skub]

Yo Paul.

I too had thought I commented on the song,but it must have been the version you deleted...

It's a cool song. Love the sound of the acoustic guitar,lovely and warm.

The overall mix is clear with a nice stereo spread,giving quite a live,natural feel.

The song gets better with each listen,it's a grower. 

[macker71165]

Simples....the melody  is good