Recently got together with my old writing partner & band and we decided we wanted a disco-esque song, so I've written this and put a demo together. No chorus yet. Just wondering what people think of a) the song so far and b) the production. I've changed my setup a bit and tried to address a common issue I have regarding my production being bass light. All feedback appreciated!
https://soundcloud.com/jack-simmons-1/disco-demoLyrics:
Lights go down
You show me there is beauty in a frown
Tell me something new about your day
Just to pass the time in an offhand way
Tell me how
A smile can turn a doomed day upside down
Even in the morning when I'm feeling worst
You are not a demon, you are not a curse
Later when you get home from work
I know it might sound a bit absurd
Put some time aside, aside to check in on me