[irwin]

This is a Christmas song I have written (I am not the singer nor I am not the one playing on this track) I am the one who did the little rap part.  Love hear members feedback.

https://soundcloud.com/irwin-abrigo/merry-christmas


Merry Christmas
©2017 Irwin Byron Abrigo

(Intro)
It's Christmas la la la la la la


(V1)
The season comes again the world's about to say
On Christmas day
It's the time you feel to give more than you did before
come what may

(Pre Chorus)
In every little home
love is celebrated oh oh ooh ooh yeah
In every heart peace for us to share
that's why I sing that's why I sing


(Chorus)
Merry Christmas to every boy and girl
Merry Christmas to the people round
The people round the world
sound of joy cheers are going out to you
a merry Christmas


(V2)
Under the Christmas tree there's a treat for me
On Christmas day
And so the family as happy as can be
every way


(pre Chorus)
In every little home
love is celebrated oh oh ooh ooh yeah
In every heart peace for us to share
that's why I sing that's why I sing


(Chorus)
Merry Christmas to every boy and girl
Merry Christmas to the people round
The people round the world
sound of joy cheers are going out to you
a merry Christmas


(Rap)
I've bring you no gifts I've bring you no toys
I know that's what you've been looking for
but where ever you are you can hear my voice
and when I sing a song I sing with all my heart
So from me to you I send my love
It's a greater gift on Christmas day
All you boys and girls, mom and dads
I wish you a merry Christmas

(Chorus)
Merry Christmas to every boy and girl
Merry Christmas to the people round
The people round the world
sound of joy cheers are going out to you
a merry Christmas

[Three Key Audio]

Hey man, i like the overall feel of the song, but it sounds a little mono for me. The vocal sounds a bit in the background. Could improve with panning/compression/EQ.

Sounds to me keeps dropping out timing every so often, not sure if thats because of expletives or something lol! The vocalist is amazing definitely keep working with them The rapping part was great too could be a bit longer though but you've definitely got something going here!

keep it up brah!

-Sean

[irwin]

Hi Sean, It is nice to hear from you. I took awhile before getting back to you with a rely ..... for I saw hoping someone else would have had something to say too.
 
I am ever grateful and do appreciate you taking the time to comment on my song. glad you like it.

Irwin

 

[crystalsuzy]

I really enjoyed listening to this song Irwin. It's sweet and heart warming, as a Xmas should be
Great vocalist and I like the backing track  you did a great job on the rap section, although it could have come in a little less abruptly though...a little smoother transition the song also ends rather
abruptly, but overall, great track

[PaulyX]

Hey Irwin
I find the rhythm patterns in this interesting (like the last one you posted). You come up with little pauses and patterns that would never occur to me.
I'm not such a big fan of xmas music but I still got something fresh from your arrangement here. You do a lot with simple instrument choices.