Into this world alone

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Jay-morris

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« on: November 27, 2017, 12:54:44 PM »
   
https://soundcloud.com/morrison-art/into-this-world-alone


I has edited the song and the lyrics. New version is up now.

Lyrics

She holds a light
As she walks down the hall
And the faces stare
As they hang upon the wall.


She was thrown
Into this world alone
Such a fall from grace
Forced into this place


Reality
Has smothered your soul
And now you feel
you have to let go

She was thrown
Into this world alone
Such a fall from grace
Forced into this place
She lives to try
And she lives to fly
Where is her home
The place she was thrown
« Last Edit: November 29, 2017, 11:11:06 AM by Jay-morris »

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« Reply #1 on: November 29, 2017, 07:33:56 PM »
Little too long intro i think .. Text i Quite like but i  see no chorus,, but finee it doesnt matter :P

Jay-morris

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« Reply #2 on: November 29, 2017, 10:45:30 PM »
Thanks for the reply and input :)