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Jay-morris
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Into this world alone
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November 27, 2017, 12:54:44 PM »
https://soundcloud.com/morrison-art/into-this-world-alone
I has edited the song and the lyrics. New version is up now.
Lyrics
She holds a light
As she walks down the hall
And the faces stare
As they hang upon the wall.
She was thrown
Into this world alone
Such a fall from grace
Forced into this place
Reality
Has smothered your soul
And now you feel
you have to let go
She was thrown
Into this world alone
Such a fall from grace
Forced into this place
She lives to try
And she lives to fly
Where is her home
The place she was thrown
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Last Edit: November 29, 2017, 11:11:06 AM by Jay-morris
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pacho
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Just write and sing!
Re: Into this world alone
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November 29, 2017, 07:33:56 PM »
Little too long intro i think .. Text i Quite like but i see no chorus,, but finee it doesnt matter
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Jay-morris
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Re: Into this world alone
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November 29, 2017, 10:45:30 PM »
Thanks for the reply and input
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