Like a stone on the road

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moraamarolaloba

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« on: November 26, 2017, 01:27:10 PM »
Life and Time walk together carrying us inside... And when we realize our insignificance... It is the perfect moment to laugh....

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4FDoBeg_sLM

Sometimes when I look back
I realize that Time
is an instant after another,
it just happens,
moving you away,
like that foot that on the road
kicks away the stones,

and thus launched
I fly in a mirror fragment
in the space of my dreams

surrounded by that music
that one sings to ward off fear,
to push away the black
and to remain.
« Last Edit: December 01, 2017, 12:57:12 PM by moraamarolaloba »
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« Reply #1 on: November 26, 2017, 05:44:21 PM »
Hi Mora.

Very, very cool. I think this is my favourite song of yours so far. It's really hypnotic, and that ambient dance rythm just holds it all together really well. The video is really cool too. Lyrics really well put together, great poetry again.

I think there is great artistry on show here. Enjoyed immensely. Cheers Micky.

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« Reply #2 on: November 26, 2017, 08:39:13 PM »
Hi Mora,

This is a great track. Really liked it. You cant go wrong with a dopebeat and a heavy bassline.

sounds a little Trip Hop. Portishead style.

Very cool video too.




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« Reply #3 on: November 26, 2017, 09:46:16 PM »
Not my style but is good

I think the voice is little autotuned? or it isnt?

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« Reply #4 on: November 26, 2017, 10:57:48 PM »
Nicely produced, some great sounding samples/synths/loops or whatever you used.

For me this is one of those songs that leaves something to the imagination and forces you to think. Some nice effects in the video and I think this added to the experience.

I could tell you enjoyed making this one.

Well done.

Yodasdad

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« Reply #5 on: November 26, 2017, 11:00:07 PM »
More great production, vocals and poetry. I got the portishead (but a shade darker) vibe too. Very cool and I really liked the understated echo/reverb guitar that came in and out. Video was brill. You’re a clever cookie :) Cx
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« Reply #7 on: November 27, 2017, 12:18:43 PM »
Hi Mora

Great soundscape.  There are lots of interesting musical additions to hold our attention throughout.  Fine lyrics that I would like to see developed further.  There is certainly space for more to really engage the listener with your story.  Production sounds very good.

Well done

Paul

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« Reply #8 on: November 27, 2017, 02:41:23 PM »
Hi Mora.

Very, very cool. I think this is my favourite song of yours so far. It's really hypnotic, and that ambient dance rythm just holds it all together really well. The video is really cool too. Lyrics really well put together, great poetry again.

I think there is great artistry on show here. Enjoyed immensely. Cheers Micky.
Hi Micky, thank you, it makes me happy you enjoyed it so much. See you. Mora
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« Reply #9 on: November 27, 2017, 02:42:42 PM »
Hi Mora,

This is a great track. Really liked it. You cant go wrong with a dopebeat and a heavy bassline.

sounds a little Trip Hop. Portishead style.

Very cool video too.

Many thanks, you are very kind. Portishead style...? Surely, I am unable to apply a style to my songs...
See you soon. Mora




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« Reply #10 on: November 27, 2017, 02:43:52 PM »
Not my style but is good

I think the voice is little autotuned? or it isnt?

Hola Pacho, thank you for commenting. Autotuned? No, I mixed my voice with chorus at the end. Be well. Mora
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« Reply #11 on: November 27, 2017, 02:46:35 PM »
Nicely produced, some great sounding samples/synths/loops or whatever you used.

For me this is one of those songs that leaves something to the imagination and forces you to think. Some nice effects in the video and I think this added to the experience.

I could tell you enjoyed making this one.

Well done.

Yodasdad

Hi Yodasdad, many thanks. You always say wonderful things on my work. I call my songs "Songs of Thought" in the playlist I did on my channel. I enjoyed a lot making the vid too, I like to become a clown.
Be well. Mora
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« Reply #12 on: November 27, 2017, 02:47:42 PM »
More great production, vocals and poetry. I got the portishead (but a shade darker) vibe too. Very cool and I really liked the understated echo/reverb guitar that came in and out. Video was brill. You’re a clever cookie :) Cx
Hi Caz, thank you for your funny comment... clever cookie? hahaha I am not sure of that... Big kiss.
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« Reply #13 on: November 27, 2017, 04:13:33 PM »
Hey this is great! really trippy!

super cool song actually...only note i would have would be that the drums need a bit more clarity with the bass/low frequency elements, perhaps a more prominent side chain?

other than that really great work!! ;) love the lyrics and overall vibe

Be excited to hear more from you! keep em comin'!

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« Reply #14 on: November 27, 2017, 04:20:43 PM »
Hey this is great! really trippy!

super cool song actually...only note i would have would be that the drums need a bit more clarity with the bass/low frequency elements, perhaps a more prominent side chain?

other than that really great work!! ;) love the lyrics and overall vibe

Be excited to hear more from you! keep em comin'!

Hi, many thanks for your comment. Yes, I think the drums could be better, I have changed my earphones today to reach a better mix. Be well and good chance with your music too. Mora
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