Lyrics advice please..

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« Reply #15 on: November 25, 2017, 03:14:59 PM »
Nah man it's your song, if you want to write about wife-beating and that's who you are no one should stop you. Songwriting is all about expressing yourself.

beggin your pardon mate, I'm not singing about wife beating and it certainly would not be
  WHO I AM??? ???
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« Reply #16 on: November 25, 2017, 03:22:25 PM »
Here's a recent example of the level of sensitivity which abounds.

http://www.bbc.co.uk/bbcthree/item/348b95fd-81d6-46d4-827e-73c727b8ceb6

yeah, it's all getting a bit stupid, particularly when you consider what the new members of the UK are doing to under age girls under the banner of religion...and with total impunity..(talkin bout FGM and various other stuff..) that white guys would get locked up for..
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« Reply #17 on: November 25, 2017, 03:29:18 PM »
Nah man it's your song, if you want to write about wife-beating and that's who you are no one should stop you. Songwriting is all about expressing yourself.

beggin your pardon mate, I'm not singing about wife beating and it certainly would not be
  WHO I AM??? ???
Oh, then yeah you should probably do a rewrite.

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« Reply #18 on: November 28, 2017, 05:14:28 PM »

Think I would flip it:

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She's gonna tan my hide

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« Reply #19 on: November 29, 2017, 12:55:18 AM »


    Hello,
     Change absolutely nothing, i repeat, absolutely nothing. Let the song remain the same.
 The PC brigade should be disbanded. That's all.

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