I am a Woman

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« Reply #15 on: November 27, 2017, 01:15:55 PM »
Becky,
Fab, you've achieved what you set out to do on an important subject.
Great set of words and production.
My highlight was your singing on the verses. They really had an edge and loved your tone.
Indeed my only thought is the difference between that and the chorus where you have your backing vocals as the substitute for a choir. I think I'd keep the backing vocals as its that and put a lead vocal over them too keep the power.
Great stuff, look forward to the next.
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Neil
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« Reply #16 on: November 27, 2017, 02:33:46 PM »
This song is well presented. your voice fits just right with the tract. Very enjoyable.
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« Reply #17 on: November 27, 2017, 10:06:06 PM »
Becky


Really cracking return. A catchy groove and hooks all over the place. I love the harmonising too. Nothing I would want to change about it. Strong message in the lyrics too. Love the plucky synth/guitar sound nearer the end of the song too.


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« Reply #18 on: November 28, 2017, 01:08:56 AM »
Its a good song , well done. Liked the vocals , liked the backing vocals..didn't get boring half way through..

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« Reply #19 on: November 30, 2017, 08:36:51 AM »
Love your voice ... this is well produced and nicely balanced, keeping the vocals central but with some nice instrumentation and backing vocals.

Well done!

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« Reply #20 on: December 02, 2017, 02:46:44 PM »
Hi Becky

Lovely sounding recording and a first rate vocal. I like that you've have been subtle in the delivery and instrumentation  - very effective. Some lovely vocal parts and very well arranged. It is an important subject and i think you've made a noble contribution.

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