Hey guys! Been a while since I've posted on the forum, but I've been working on a new track and would love to get some feedback. I wrote this with a female singer in mind. It's about being in love with someone who only loves you back (or shows it) when they're intoxicated.
https://soundcloud.com/micky-shiloah/tunnel-vision-demoThanks all!
Lyrics:
I switch sides of the bed in the morning 'cause I miss you
We had fun last night but the sun comes up every time it starts getting good
I dressed nice 'cause I knew that I was gonna see you
I smelled better than I usually do just in case we got close and touched for a second or two
And ooh you've got a lot to say tonight
It looks like you've had one too many
Ooh it's my favorite time of night
When you've had one too many
Come and give it to me
All your attention and your tunnel vision
(give it to me right now, give it to me right now)
Give it, give it to me i'll spend my money on your contradictions
(give it to me right now, give it to me right now)
And I don't care if it only lasts one night I want it
Ooh I want it
(even if it's just tonight I want it, yea I want it)
Now you're getting pretty close and I really wanna kiss you
It's been fun tonight but the sun's coming up so we better start getting good
So come on pick it up, hurry up, do you need another one?
Drink it up, hurry up, I think I need another cup
I'll take it
Yea I'll take it
And ooh you've got a lot to say tonight
Looks like you've had one too many
Ooh it's my favorite time of night
When we've had one too many
Come and give it to me
All your attention and your tunnel vision
(give it to me right now, give it to me right now)
Gimme, gimme a love you only see inside your television
(give it to me right now, give it to me right now)
And I don't care if it only lasts one night I want it
Ooh I want it
I want love
I wanna feel you loving me
Loving me, oh
(I wanna feel your love, I wanna feel your love)
Repeat
And I don't care if it only lasts one night I want it
(I really want it)
Come and give it to me
All your attention and your tunnel vision
(give it to me right now, give it to me right now)
Give it, give it to me i'll spend my money on your contradictions
(give it to me right now, give it to me right now)
Come and give it to me
All your attention and your tunnel vision
(give it to me right now, give it to me right now)
Gimme, gimme a love you only see inside your television
(give it to me right now, give it to me right now)
And I don't care if it only lasts one night I want it
Ooh I want it