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« on: November 15, 2017, 07:27:52 PM »
Just a little something I randomly threw together in just shy of ten minutes

Within my grasp, now you’re finally here
I said no strings, but you’re my puppeteer
And you’re pulling me in so far I can’t escape
Making me question how much I can really take

It’s been hours and I’m barely breaking a sweat
The way you make me feel makes it effortless
I didn’t know I could be so generous
Don’t be alarmed by my vigour, its just a preference


Baby set the mood, I’m coming for you
We can do whatever we choose as long
As you let loose
Baby you got me good, you deserve a knighthood
When you’re on your knees for me

I can’t even open my eyes coz I’m scared
That with a blink of an eye you won’t be there
Even though I can feel your breath all over my skin
The crackle of your heat is deafening

I never knew such fantasy could exist
Some write a story with ink, some with a kiss
And now a brush of your lips wouldn’t go amiss
To jolt me out of this love paralysis

Baby set the mood, I’m coming for you
We can do whatever we choose as long
As you let loose
Baby you got me good, you deserve a knighthood
When you’re on your knees for me

I’m going to tell you something right here
Darling I ain’t feeling like no Shakespeare
All I want to say is don’t stop what you’re doin’
Coz you make it hard to think, well baby
I’m only human

Baby set the mood, I’m coming for you
We can do whatever we choose as long
As you let loose
Baby you got me good, you deserve a knighthood
When you’re on your knees for me

pacho

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« Reply #1 on: November 25, 2017, 10:47:05 AM »
I would like to hear it with style of song as Love is a b*tch..
I think it fit perfectly.

I think i have good melody.. If you odnt have already tell me i would send it to you if you want.

I already have a little demo so tell me and i will send to you
« Last Edit: November 25, 2017, 12:23:19 PM by pacho »

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« Reply #2 on: November 25, 2017, 11:54:18 AM »
Like it, think it would be quite easy for somebody good with music to make it into a song.