PompeyJazz
Just listened to your remixed version.
MUCH better, is it slightly faster? could still be a bit faster. but something is missing, I think it's strummed acoustic guitar, if there is one forgive me, but I was just trying to think what the 60's sound would have, I hope you don't mind.
I know what it is, the lead vox needs a shadow, not a double track, but bits to thicken it out, not BVox, do you know what I mean, the lead vox sound a bit exposed.
I'm not sure the organ is necessary if you put in a strummed acoustic, panned over to the side somewhere.
It's a very good song.
Hope you find this useful
CPM