[zeb wardon]

Hello! please check out a new song I wrote...Please share your feedback. Thanks

https://soundcloud.com/zeb_wardon92/never-a-reason

My skull can't take
An underlying diseases
No mercy for there to see
Withdrawn surrender
So far behind
Too soon oh my my
Notion kindly taken
One less forsaken
Same lie same lie

Then all was mellow
Seemingly
Double trouble for
Tomorrow for tomorrow
For tomorrow
There's never a
There's never a
There's never a reason 

Permission granted
to take for granted
sometimes you gotta be true
self sabotage
Only you 
Good night old friend
Tomorrow rising days are forgotten
Till the sunsets

Then all was mellow
Seemingly
Double trouble for
Tomorrow for tomorrow
For tomorrow
There's never a
There's never a
There's never a reason 

Then all was mellow
Seemingly
Double trouble for
Tomorrow for tomorrow
For tomorrow
There's never a
There's never a

A reason
A reason
A reason
A reason

[Boydie]

Hey ZEB

You may have noticed that your songs are not getting many reviews

This part of the forum is all about "give and take" - the more you get involved with the forum and review others the more reviews you will get for your own songs

So far you have 5 posts - 3 of those are you posting your own songs and the other 2 are you commenting on your own song threads!

I would suggest diving in and doing some reviews and you will find the forum opens up to you

[shadowfax]

+1

[2tuoo]

A lot of swing in this tune!

the vocals are hiding behind the music, I listened and read this thread to follow the lyrics's (lyricses?) meaning. I would take the music volume down a notch.

Beyond the technicalities, I feel the soul in the song, makes you listen till the end for sure.