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The Way I Feel For You

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ADAMmusic2011

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« on: October 04, 2011, 10:25:40 PM »
Verse 1
Hello, now I’m sorry
For blaming you all those times
I never thought anything of it
I made myself be blinded
And now I’m reminded of the times we had
Always thought that me and you could
Make it past anything in the way
But then I push too far
And make you walk away for the last time


Chorus
Now I’m living with all this regret
And I can’t seem to forgive myself
For what I did to you
So why can’t I just forget the day we met
But it’s so hard when I still love you
Now when I’m seeing you with him
I can’t help the way I still feel for you
The way I feel for you
The way I feel for you


Verse 2
Since we went our own ways
I feel so alone without you, without you
And I keep waiting every night and day
For the phone to ring
Hoping it’s you, hoping it’s you
But its sends me crazy
Sending me in a hazy dream
Thinking of you and what you would do
But how can I stop
When all I ever got was you


Chorus
Now I’m living with all this regret
And I can’t seem to forgive myself
For what I did to you
So why can’t I just forget the day we met
But it’s so hard when I still love you
Now when I’m seeing you with him
I can’t help the way I still feel for you
The way I feel for you
The way I feel for you


Verse 3
All these’s lonely night
I spend in the bed we once sheared
I turn to the side you slept on long gone
And I remember nothing but all the memories 
We once had and now
I can’t help but think of you and him
Do you feel the same way for him
As you did for me
Does he drive you crazy just like I once did
Does he make you laugh like i did before
And do you know
I still fell the same way for you today

 
Chorus X2
Now I’m living with all this regret
And I can’t seem to forgive myself
For what I did to you
So why can’t I just forget the day we met
But it’s so hard when I still love you
Now when I’m seeing you with him
I can’t help the way I still feel for you
The way I feel for you
The way I feel for you


Repeat X2
I still feel the same for you, for you
I still feel the same touch from the very first day
 From the very first day
And it keeps me going crazy every single day
over you, over you
ADAMmusic2011

deniseA81

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« Reply #1 on: October 05, 2011, 10:27:50 AM »
Nice composition. I like your way in writing a song. Its really cool...  8)
I love writing a song and listening to music that i love.....Rock 'N Roll!!!!!!!!

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« Reply #2 on: October 05, 2011, 10:50:00 AM »
Go away. Promote your book somewhere else. This board is for legitimate feedback.

Adam, good stuff. Like I said earlier though, try to diversify your writing as it's all on the same kinda stuff right now.
Also, respond to some of the other feedback on your songs and give some feedback to some other people instead of just throwing out more lyrics for review.
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