[Adi Eric]

hi there,

I'm a little musician from Mainz, Germany and I've wrote a couple of songs. So here's "Seven Seas".
I wrote it after a party night. It's about diffidence. I am a quite shy person and I wondered just why 
So I am starting a project called "Hello Stranger" to realize my songs. Stay tuned, if you want


Lyrics:

i wanna fall in love again
the only way to survive
and I'm sure there won't be rain
when I swim to you to the other side
I never saw your eyes before but I know they're true
and I know they make me fly
I will cross the ocean for you

on the seven seas I'm floating around in hope that you are waiting for me
so all you need is to be around when I come along with the breeze

and the clouds in the sky are hiding the sun for a while
but I don't feel cold, cuz I'm thinking of you all the time
and the sweet sunrise makes me realize that love isn't a lie
cuz real eyes realize real lies

on the seven seas I'm floating around in hope that you are waiting for me
so all you need is to be around when I come along with the breeze
one day baby I will love this island, one day I will sail away with the breeze
I will follow the doves in the sky, floating around on the seven seas
and the clouds are hiding, the clouds are hiding the sun for a while
but I don't feel cold, cuz I'm thinking of you all the time


Song:

https://soundcloud.com/adieric/hello-stranger-seven-seas


So I would be happy about some feedback

greetings

adi

[Vintage54]

   Hello!
     Really like this, has a relaxed and dreamy feel to it. Reminds me of early Bon Iver, the Emma album, and anything that sounds like that is a winner in my book. Gonna turn the lights down low, pour a glass of wine, listen again, and drift away.

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                                Vintage54

[PaulyX]

Welcome Adi (or is it Eric?).
This is really really strong.  Full of atmosphere and very contemporary-indie sounding.
Your voice sounds great and you have a few gems in the lyrics ("real eyes realise real lies": ace).  I like the way you structure it too - not too predictable, especially towards the end.
What a great song to turn up with.  I have no improvements to suggest.

[kevysc]

 Very atmospheric, and you have a great voice. Very interesting production, with a kind-of Indie lo-fi vibe. Contemporary feel and strong lyrics.

Very nice intro to the forum, well done!

Kevin

[Adi Eric]

Very atmospheric, and you have a great voice. Very interesting production, with a kind-of Indie lo-fi vibe. Contemporary feel and strong lyrics.

Very nice intro to the forum, well done!

Kevin

thx Kevin 

[Adi Eric]

   Hello!
     Really like this, has a relaxed and dreamy feel to it. Reminds me of early Bon Iver, the Emma album, and anything that sounds like that is a winner in my book. Gonna turn the lights down low, pour a glass of wine, listen again, and drift away.

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                                Vintage54

ohh thx, bon iver is one of my favorites

[Adi Eric]

Welcome Adi (or is it Eric?).
This is really really strong.  Full of atmosphere and very contemporary-indie sounding.
Your voice sounds great and you have a few gems in the lyrics ("real eyes realise real lies": ace).  I like the way you structure it too - not too predictable, especially towards the end.
What a great song to turn up with.  I have no improvements to suggest.

It's just Adi, shameless to say this "real eyes realize real lies" is from a metal band called machine head 
but I'm happy you liked it