[giitlesriddles]

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Here's a blues rock tune I wrote called Let me know. I was going for a zeppelin kinda sound.
Lyrics are as follows

You gotta let me breath
My face is turnin blue
It's been so long since I met someone who grips the way you do

I'm tugging at your sleeve
I'm struggling to move
You say I know what you're talkin about but honey I ain't got clue would you let me know
Would you let me know

You're flooding all my rooms
Seeping through the cracks
And studies show that you're the leading cause of my heart attacks

And I will scream for you
Until my lungs collapse
And when it's done I'll say I'm the one who sprung all of your traps would you let me go
let me go

And I wish I was half as bright as your eyes did glow
you knock me out with every single blow
and if you wish you'd leave me lyin there just waiting for the crows
I'd do it myself if you told me so

I feel your fingers down my spine
my bones begin to tense
I'd say it's time to call this off but that'd make too much sense

I've been scarred a thousand times
beaten full of dents
and can you name I time I still leaped to your defense
would you let me know
let me know

And I wish I was half as bright as your eyes did glow
you knock me out with every single blow
and if you wish you'd leave me lyin there just waiting for the crows
I'd do it myself if you told me so
And I wish I was half as bright as your eyes did glow
you knock me out with every single blow
and if you wish you'd leave me lyin there just waiting for the crows
I'd do it myself if you told me so

[Darren1664]

Hey giitlesriddles

I think this is a really great track and performance. I let the video run and stumbled on some more of your stuff. You are an excellent guitar player! You're vocals suits your style perfectly and I think the lyrics were really good!

This works really well as is and is a great live performance but I do feel are produced version of this (and your other tracks) would sound so brilliant.

Thanks for sharing mate

Darren

[exfairy]

This is real catchy and fun - I really like it! If you're looking for some contructive feedback, perhaps more melodic distinction between the chorus and verse (so it's easier to know which is which), but otherwise I think this is great!

[Skub]

Yo Mister Gittleman.

I can hear the Zep thang you aimed for,to me it sounded a lot more like early Fleetwood Mac with Peter Green,songs like Green Manalishi and Oh Well.

Cracker lyrics and intriguing live performance,plus good use of natural reverb. 

[Cawproductions]

Dude,

You rock this style, Not sure where you recorded this but some serious natural reverb which I reckon added character.

Tune has attitude, I have listened to your channel, Freakin love the style, White stripes style and love the video with the mexican hat bass dude.

This tune will be pumped when all done with your band..

Nice work.