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Deeper Than The Seven Seas (Edited)

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PerGunnar

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« on: October 13, 2017, 07:45:52 PM »
Wondering if I should add one more verse or not?


Deeper Than The Seven Seas

Verse 1:

If you’d be my daily Valentine
I’d love you through flames and fallin’ skies
Each day and every single week
I’d brush a rose on your cheek

And sustain it with a soft kiss
I’d show you what true love is
Deeper than the seven seas

Chorus:

When the sky falls down on me
I’ll keep you in my heart endlessly
Cause I’ll never ever ever leave
My love is deeper than the seven seas

When I look into your eyestars tenderly
You’re beautiful like fine art so heavenly
So I’ll never ever ever leave
My love is deeper than the seven seas

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Every time I see you I just freeze
You’re beautiful like fine art so heavenly
So I’ll never ever ever leave
My love is deeper than the seven seas

Verse 2:
 
Like the icy waves polishing cliffs
And sweeping storms make clear cobalt water drift
We converge like charged colliding particles
Through contrasting colors heart flickers
 
From Aurora’s magnetic midnight are we
Gravitating like perigee moon’s rough seas
Deeper than the seven seas

Bridge:

You’re like a diamond’s core
Others dirt can’t reveal your true colours
You’re darkened, burned like fire coal
And now can you trust any others

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Verse 3 - Rap:
 
You make my heart rush like the churning waves
It aches, nothing can quench my burning flames
Your gem hard rough carves soft, within the heart
Your heart drops clinching to my arms, ridding of the scars
Faith’s art brush forms star dust, us written in the stars
You’re hidden in the heart, looking at you like I’m reading beauty's art
Even though your tears are deep as the sea’s void
You’ll leap from real joy, don’t weep, I’m your sweet boy

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Nicolajane87

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« Reply #1 on: October 18, 2017, 02:38:06 PM »
Hi PerGunnar,

I like this, really nice lyrics and i love that you've put a rap in it to, I don't you think you need to add another verse looks great as it is, cant wait to hear it.

NicolaJane