[Neil C]

great write.
With the lyrics, although nearly all of us are guilty.
Tune punches along nicely in the verses and then the prechorsu has a great energy to the payoff.
Sorry I'll have to let you go now...
 
N

[rightly]

dude, you're on fire!

I read the 2nd verse 1st. I thought wow, that must be the best verse.
So I read the whole thing and found all three are the best verses.

you've got so many top tunes. "I'm sleepy" is my favourite.
Still I can't imagine you sleeping, lol.

Are record labels at all interested in you?

[montydog]

Hi,

You're into a rich seam of material ATM and this is no exception. This song is so on message with how many of us olduns feel. Your vocal is again top notch. Everything about this is in the premier league. Loved the accompanying photo as well. Can't find a single thing I'd change.

M

[digger72]

Hi

Full throttle from the get go.
Love the wall of music - great backdrop for the vocal.
Lyrically on my wavelength. Hate the darned things.
Strong vocal - so sincere.

Digger

[pompeyjazz]

Thank you all so much for your reviews and comments on this latest one. As usual I've taken some of the suggestions on board, namely taking some guitar out of the verse and slightly speeding it up 

Many Thanks once again

Pompeyjazz

[Binladeda]

 Top stuff PJ    I love it when you sing like this...
 The whole package is full of passion and power.  Great
 expression, and the message is driven home


 

[Morefrog Jones]

Cool clever stuff as usual. some good surround sound background stuff going on and lots of interest in the story/lyrics.....an enjoyable listen ...just as i expected it to be and was not disapointed.

[skogge]

Well most have been said so I just wanted to add that I have listened and yes, we have a result:
Thumbs up. Nice rocker and I loathe these damned fones as well. Added the health impact of the radiaton that no-one acknowlegdes 
You are annoyed. The song sounds annoyed. Pump up the volume!