What I Am Supposed To Do (lyric)

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ADAMmusic2011

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« on: October 03, 2011, 11:32:24 PM »
Verse 1
I’m feeling so lost
With in this world
The darkness has came over
Where can I find the light
To start again to find the path
The path I need to take
To find myself once again
And to release the pain within my self
Because all I am is in peaces now
And I’m tired of struggling on
So tell me what do

 
Chorus
How, how can I find the way
To escape from all this pain
To regain who I am
And to put all the fears away
Tell me what I I am supposed to do
When I don’t know what to do
How, how I’m I to grow
When all I do is fall back down
I don’t know what to do
So tell me what I am supposed to do


Verse 2
Each time I tried so hard
Gave it all my best
Gave everything to it
So why does it desert me
Why can’t I win just one time
To climb back up again
To win the fight like I did before
So tell me what
What am I supposed to do
When all I am is lost somewhere
And I don’t know where to start


Chorus
How, how can I find the way
To escape from all this pain
To regain who I am
And to put all the fears away
Tell me what I I am supposed to do
When I don’t know what to do
How, how I’m I to grow
When all I do is fall back down
I don’t know what to do
So tell me what I am supposed to do


Verse 3
I try and try
To build myself again
But so, so many things
Keep coming and knocking me down
So all I can do is pick myself up
And start all over again
But tell me will this go on forever
I need to know then never
So tell me what I want to hear


Chorus
How, how can I find the way
To escape from all this pain
To regain who I am
And to put all the fears away
Tell me what I am supposed to do
When I don’t know what to do
How, how I’m I to grow
When all I do is fall back down
I dont know what to do
So tell me what I am supposed to do


Repeat X2
So when I’m down and low
Tell me what I’m supposed to do
When all I know is gone and lost
And I don’t know what to do
ADAMmusic2011

Aria Gracefield

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« Reply #1 on: October 04, 2011, 04:44:52 PM »
hey,
I really like where ur starting out lyrically, its just from what i read of your lyrics you kinda get the jist of where ur goin then it sort of drifts off.
there also seems to be a lot of recycled lyrics where you take a same-ish line from the chorus and add it into a verse, obv if it were to be put into an actual song form some lyrics could be overlooked.
on the whole ur lyrics seem very thoughtful and promising and i generally like where ur goin with them