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skogge

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« Reply #15 on: October 10, 2017, 09:29:00 AM »
Lovely little tune. Nice melodi and a pleasant voice/delivery.
Since I am such a lo-fi / DIY-pop lover I love this. Dunno what will happen if you polish it though? Maybe better, but better for me? :)
I love the off-beat drums, not really sure about the chorused guitar, maybe I would have wanted the vocals a little more in my face / breathy because they at times feels a bit distant.
But hey, it makes me happy and grows a smile on my face.
What more can you ask for in a song?
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redrhodie

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« Reply #16 on: October 10, 2017, 09:23:59 PM »
Lovely little tune. Nice melodi and a pleasant voice/delivery.
Since I am such a lo-fi / DIY-pop lover I love this. Dunno what will happen if you polish it though? Maybe better, but better for me? :)
I love the off-beat drums, not really sure about the chorused guitar, maybe I would have wanted the vocals a little more in my face / breathy because they at times feels a bit distant.
But hey, it makes me happy and grows a smila on my face.
What more can you ask for in a song?

Thanks so much! Makes my day, putting a smile on your face.

Neil C

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« Reply #17 on: October 16, 2017, 05:44:02 PM »
hi,
liked the storytelling which is where I get the TP reference.
and enjoying the guitar pop and your vocals, which are cool.
loved the stripped down bit towards age end when you double your vocals
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neil
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Vandayay

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« Reply #18 on: October 16, 2017, 11:07:30 PM »
Hi

Nice song. I agree with others that the solo needs to 'let go' a bit more, but for me it's the rhythm guitar that to ponderous and heavy. I can see you wanted a 60s 'jingle-jangle sound' to it, but it might work better acoustic and a bit lighter. Also it could work well a few bpm faster??

Good luck

Darren1664

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« Reply #19 on: November 01, 2017, 06:44:00 PM »
Really lovely catchy song. Really enjoyed listening to this :) you have great ideas red and some great tracks. Looking forward to hearing more of yours.

redrhodie

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« Reply #20 on: November 02, 2017, 09:16:57 AM »
Thanks Neil!

Vanjayay, I'm not sure I agree, but I appreciate the listen and comment. 

Darren, I'm so glad you like my songs.