Hi,
I am a songwriter, but not the best performer or producer. I recorded this song on my phone so dont mind the crappy quality and poor singing. Curious if you guys/girls think this song has any potential? Its not my idea to sing it myself (because i dont consider my voice good enough), so if you are a singer and want to do something with this song please let me know.
Working title: On the run
I still see the day when I met you in the clay
a long long time ago and far away
i never understood, but when I' m with you its just all good
will you please let me take care of you i could
from this day I belong, to you until your gone
I will love you all day long, and after dark, until the dawn
this years passed away, just as happy as today
like all the sweet things you used to say
when I was feeling sad, you always told me lad
we are not alone something we never had
and so every day felt right, when you were by my side
forever on this ride, on which I'll never have to hide
but after a while, I just couldnt make you smile
the sadness in your eyes was there to stay
I couldnt find a way, not like before, or understood
I couldnt help you anymore this very day
and i should have known, I am better off alone
just on my own I know, it feels like coming home
you dont need to say where you lay your head
in whatever bed you now break bread baby its okay
outro:
you're the clever one, no you're never done
when you're on the run, forever hon
it's never fun to win a ton, you cant take none
when you're on the run hon.
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