Help - Struggling with chorus melody

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Andyb

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« on: September 28, 2017, 04:41:53 PM »
ok this is a new song we have in the works and I'll be honest I'm struggling with a vocal hook, The lyrics shouldn't be an issue once I get the notes / phrasing sorted. All my ideas so far are heavy cheese and I just want something a bit...... better lol ! I'm not even sure how you would relate your ideas to me (I cant read music). I'm back in the studio in 2 weeks and have promised that I will have it finished .....

https://soundcloud.com/the-signal-fires/galvanise-no-chorus

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« Reply #1 on: September 28, 2017, 04:58:45 PM »
Hi Andy. Nice track! If you send me through the lyrics and the chords I'd be happy to write you a couple of alternate chorus melodies
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« Reply #3 on: September 28, 2017, 11:45:34 PM »
I should point out that it's the vocal melody I'm struggling with to fit the guitar chords etc we're not looking to change any of the music (major headache) ... not sure if I made that clear in my original post

Yeah that's what I thought. PM me if you're interested
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« Reply #4 on: October 09, 2017, 11:02:41 AM »
A really good ´n catchy rocker here. I also might have something for you. Just gimme a holler if you want to.