great song lyrics, wanting a collaboration

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Rightly

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« on: October 01, 2017, 07:28:05 AM »
ok. me too.
I'd be interested to hear what anyone might have to offer for this
regarding chords and melody
or even beats.          I'd really like to play it on guitar

I've had ideas come and go, nothing stuck.

help me !!


The Mark Of Cain


First man borne of earthly woman
Wakeful and fresh as the morning dew
As the heavens fell he was as false as hell
Over which he was meant to rise and rule

Crouched was sin, waiting in desire for him
Only one shade darker than quicksand
Sunken in haste as he tried to mask all trace
Blood of Abel crying out from the land

Rolling and rounded, running in a circle of blood and grain
We never truly were forgiven, only smitten with the...
The mark of Cain, angry and vain
The Mark of Cain

Expelled from all the glory of Eden
Sent forth and far from the grace of God
With flesh of his brother and the fruits of the field
'Built a city, 'settled in the land of Nod

Industry of lust, engines of sin
We begin with all fair favors spent
Of sound n' fury, live n' love thy misery
Daggers in the smiles both of foe and of friend

Thus were laid the laws of human nature, n' they don't change
The dye is cast from the first unto the last, with the...
The mark of Cain, angry and vain
The Mark of Cain

 Rolling, rounded, running, a circle of blood and of grain
We never truly were forgiven, only smitten with the...
The mark of Cain, angry and vain
The Mark of Cain

The Mark of Cain

It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

And there you have it. 

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« Reply #1 on: November 02, 2017, 08:30:12 PM »
Hi Rightly!

I've read your lyrics and tried to sing them a few times and it still feels fun.

I'm a born and raised atheist so some of the lyrics might take a while for me to figure out.

I'm willing to give your lyrics a serious shot.

Martin