Hey guys,
I've been working on this track on and off and trying to finish it now. However, I feel like it's not quite ready yet but I don't know why or what is missing
... To me it feels a bit bland but can't put my finger on it.
So I'm hoping you could help me out and give it a listen, and perhaps have an idea what to change (or not)? Would really appreciate your help!
https://soundcloud.com/marieke-verboekend/we-ended-nowhere/s-tSchQLyrics:
Silencing the voices in my head
They are trying to take me back
To a time when you were still mine
To a time where we were still kind
We are only shadows of the past
We were never meant to last
Chorus:
We fell out of the sky
We were flying to high
We went everywhere
But we ended nowhere
Somewhere in the dark I see your ghost
It still haunts me, even when I'm not alone
Why can I not find some rest
Why'd you torture me to death
We are only shadows of the past
We were never meant to last
Chorus
Bridge
We are only shadows in this light
We were never meant to shine as bright
Chorus.
Many thanks!!
Marieke