[PENKSLYRICS]

Here is a recently completed song which meant as a thank you to all our forces.
Who have protected our world in all conflicts past, present or future.

https://soundcloud.com/penkslyrics/salt-of-the-earth

Please have a listen and share your thoughts.

Note it is available for any bands/singers wishing to make their own recording of it and release it.

[Mikey]

Nicely done track, captured the emotion well and was well structured and performed, a good listen.

Mikey

[PENKSLYRICS]

Thanks Mikey
Glad you enjoyed.

[Almosthumanrobot]

I like the guitar part and then the second electric? guitar joining in! Your lyrics in this song are pretty great as well, especially the verse man, good stuff!
As for feedback, I think this song would really benefit if the drumroll you included came in later in the song. I get the feeling you're going for with it, I just think it doesn't really fit the guitar rythm you got going in the first part of the song.
Other than that, awesome song!

[Neil C]

Roger,
Good title and neat track.
Nice guitar playing and singing.
My only observation is I wouldn't have the snare rattling throughout it I think it doesn't need the distraction and maybe bring it in latter.
 
neil