[Sullish]

Old song, new video, be gentle....

So youre getting married walking down the aisle
Thought you might take time and leave it a while
Soon youll have a baby thatll make you smile
Shame you didn’t have mine i guess it wasn’t right.

Doesn’t seem long since we were apart, ive been telling stories of how you broke my heart
Now i hear the news coming through the wires how your life is changing catching on fire

Didn’t take you long to move down the line get yourself sorted ive been taking time
Does he make you laugh does he make you cry guess you'll look great standing by his side

All the promises you said
Are turning round inside my head

All our hopes and dreams a mess
sewn in to the seams of your wedding dress.

[jamesh]

Hi


Cracking guitar solo and good instrumentation throughout. I had a piano arpegio going through my head at the end.

I thought the melody on the verses could do with a bit more variation to hold the attention, it felt a bit repetitive. At 6 minutes long, its also quite long song, but hey, why stick with convention!

Lyrics are quite direct rather than full of metaphors and similes. Maybe thats just the style of music and Im no lyrics expert!

Hope that helps.


James

[shortwhat]

big fan of the brutal honestly in the lyrics, really starts to give me chills after a while, I'd say the only thing i was left wanting here was more lines, an extra verse or something. good job here:)

[Mikey]

Great track guys, it built up very well and was well performed, some very nice lead guitar work in there, didn't feel like 6 minutes long as it kept moving along nicely.

Good listen, well done

Mikey

[Wolfini]

Killer guitar sound and solo! Very cool!

I think the song could use more parts, like a chorus, a hook or something.

Very nice lady verse in your lyrics about the seams.

Bye Wolfi