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Young Love

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Joanna

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« on: September 05, 2017, 06:33:27 PM »
Hey y'all :) this song is about a toxic relationship and its also my first song so please tell me what y'all think!

       -Verse 1-
We're blind in what we think is love
but really its not something you dream of.
What we have ain't real. So don't tell me I'm makin it a big deal.
All we're doing is going through the motions
First it was warmth and roses, but now its just cold and frozen.
       -Chorus-
Young loves like a drug.
Which gives a special kinda buzz
I never wanted it to end
and losing you was something I didn't intend.
      -Verse 2-
It used to be fun especially when it just begun
but I'm leavin now and goin on the run.
When it started slow and I thought it'd pass and go.
Your coldness was like a bullet to my heart.
If only we could take it back to how it was at the start.
       -Chorus-
Young loves like a drug.
Which gives a special kinda buzz
I never wanted it to end
and losing you was something I didn't intend.
      -Verse 3-
I'm tired of all these games, all our time just goin down the drain.
This love, this poision, this unholy devotion is gonna be the death of me.
I'm on my knees beggin please, just let me free.
Our high wasn't worth all the withdrawls after I let you tear down my walls.
I'm on my own now searchin for love all alone.

Martinswede

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« Reply #1 on: September 12, 2017, 07:54:17 PM »
Hi!

Good first lyrics!
Not that much story to it.
Keep writing, keep practicing, keep getting better.