[montydog]

I voted for Brexit, after hoping for a chance to get a vote on it for over 20 years...and I would absolutely do so again, even if I had to crawl over broken glass to get to the polling station 

That doesn't make you an idiot, you just did an idiotic thing IMHO. Oh dear, what have I started. Everyone entitled to their own opinions and so on and all meant with lots of love and respect.

[PaulAds]

That's Democracy, folks 

[Morefrog Jones]

Subtly done and not too in your face -  The songs jolly feel hides a powerful message/opinion with good  story telling - theres no need to know what it is about for it to be enjoyed.

[Viscount Cramer & His Orchestra]

I'm with Adam on that guitar sound in the opening verse.....ok so this is only a rough.

So....song is fine, not knocking me out like RamRaid yet but the potntial is there...the chorus is a good one (like RR) with a lot of appeal.

My initial thoughts were/are....get rid of verse 4 and quicker into the second chorus....echoing Neil a bit but I would strike out this verse altogether. I know it has its use as a conclusion to the story lyrically which makes it a tough one. Bridge and concluding chorus just right.....nothing really wrong with having that 2 verse chorus 2 verses chorus either......I just want my chorus earlier second time around!

There that's my view...not a lot of bloody good to you, is it?

[redrhodie]

Hi Pauly,

I listened to this several days ago, started commenting, and got distracted. So, now it's days later, and it's still a memorable song and story. That's probably all I need to say. It's one that stays with you, and makes you think.

[JoeAntaine]

Love the feel, instrumentation, laddie vocals. Charming lyrics. My only complaint would be to tighten up the form up a bit. Maybe a little more editing needed.
Bar that, full of character, touchy, nice. Well done.

[Binladeda]

 Love it Paul   Fantastic lyrics....you have a gift my friend.  Just love the sentiment here.
 All wrapped up in a heartwarming story.  Nice vocals, reminded me a bit of Bowie in places.

 I thought the production was a bit lacking.  I know this is just a demo, but I thought it could
 do with a bit more depth,  it's all sparkle and presence atm....still sounds good though

 Excellent work mate....

[Threepwood]

I must say there's a lot of talented people here on the forum with a lot to offer. It's way better than listening to the radio in my country.
This reminds me of Brian Eno or David Bowie in the Hunky Dory days. Odd'n'catchy. Very catchy and enjoyable singing melody that sticks with me after just one single listen. Was kinda hoping for a short la-la-la- chorus at the end, but it seems like you know what you're doing:)
Cheers! I enjoyed this!

[Paulski]

Hi Pauly

What a great song.
Politics is lost on me out here in the colonies but those lyrics are amazing IMHO.
Some really clever rhymes and phrases.
Love the tempo and the catchy chorus.
Polish away I say  though I don't see any dull spots.

Paul

[PaulyX]

Thanks a lot for the further input on this one guys.  Plenty to weigh up and take account of when we start recording and mixing this one properly, and everything you guys have noted makes sense.  Very grateful.

[Darren1664]

Well this made SOTM it's current state so that says everything really

It's a great catchy song with intelligent lyrics. It's what I have come to expect of you and you don't disappoint ...just waiting for the album!

Great stuff Paul

Thanks

Darren

[skogge]

Catchy little gem with a clever take on a difficult topic. I would definatly dance (jump around) to this. The Frank and Walters came to mind and if thats not a seal of approval I dunno what is!

[Wicked Deeds]

Great song.  I think you’ve developed this really well.  I first saw the title and thought it was a great title for a guy who drove a getaway van in a robbery.  Obviously it’s about something quite different.  Super song my friend! I guitar solo, to compliment your production would be great. Well done.

Paul

[moraamarolaloba]

Hi Pauly, your song has made me have a good time, despite the very real lyrics. It brings to mind many reminiscences of styles and groups, is normal, I think many of us here have heard the same Time.
At first, I thought it was going to be one way but then, when the rest comes in, I already felt comfortable there.
The letter has made me think that the world easily forgets the past even if it is present, if it were not so, nothing of the bad of this past would happen again, but everything repeats itself, repeats itself, repeats itself... But, now there is your song here, a very good song.
Mora

(Thank you for visiting my song).

[LostBoy]

Hello mate,

This is a great tune, I love your vocal delivery, the lyrics are perfect imho! The chorus is my fave bit though. It’s just fab! I kind of wanted more of it quicker if that makes sense? If it was my tune I might play around with shortening that second verse & getting back to the really good stuff.

I love it though! Great job!