Collab on this upbeat Melody

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josemar

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« on: August 20, 2017, 06:31:59 PM »

Hi,
Like a latiny/dance beat...in 2/4 time...
If anyone has some strong lyrical ideas...(I have dummy ones to get started)
Verse melody, has some spirit, I think....chorus more relaxed...

tx,
joe
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Tellex

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« Reply #1 on: August 21, 2017, 03:20:24 AM »
THIS SOUNDS AWESOME,

        i would love to write a little something over it
   
    if thats okay lol have you got any theme or anything like that in mind ?

Davino

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« Reply #2 on: May 19, 2018, 10:37:41 AM »
"Prancing"
Well, I'm a-prancin' and a-dancin' and I'm feeling alright,
I got the moonlight baby steps swagger in my soul,
a clippin' and a cloppin' and a-moving merrily along...
Yes I'll be prancin' and a dancin' while I'm singing my song
Well, I'm a-prancin' and a-dancin' and I'm feeling alright,
I got a feeling in my bones that I'm gonna see the light,
shining and divining and guiding me merilly along
Yes I'll be prancin' and a dancin while I'm singing my song

Hey Won't you twirl with me girl?
Make a wish and you'll keep it unspoken,
I'll try and guess it from the rhythm of your dance,
as you're looping in circles with closed eyes
in a metamorphic trance up to the skies...
 
Well, I'm a-prancin' and a-dancin' and I'm feeling alright,
I got the moonlight baby steps swagger in my soul,
a clippin' and a cloppin' and a-moving merrily along...
Yes Ill be prancin' and a dancin' while I'm singing my song

Hey won't you twirl with me girl?
I've been looking with eyes wide open
From the moment that I saw you and the rhythm of your dance,
You were shaking and awaking with closed eyes
in a psychedelic trance up to the skies...

All I wanna do is dance with you honey
That's the reason why I brought out my money
To buy me some fun, when the clock strikes one
In the void between daytime and night
That's the time that I'll treat you right

Well, I'm a-prancin' and a-dancin' and I'm feeling alright,
I got a feeling in my bones that I'm gonna see the light,
shining and divining and guiding me merilly along
Yes I'll be prancin' and a dancin' while I'm singing my song...

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